Sunday, October 30, 2005

Steak Please



I finished a silly piece that will hopefully get you giggling...


Steak Please © Gentlebutfirm 2005 (MF)

Comment:
Does clever banter and innuendo work for you? Followed by sex? Yes?.

Quote:
His innocent smile was too much for me, and I looked down, hoping to God that I wasn't staining my skirt, or the expensive chair.

Locations:
ASSTR - http://www.asstr.org/~gentlebutfirm/Steak%20please.htm
Stories Online - http://storiesonline.net/library/author.php?id=1632 (once it cycles)

Feedback:
- Superb. Dialogue isn't something I do well, here's a good example of well done dialogue.
- I loved it! I giggled all the way through!!! :-)
- Anyway, very very well done, not my type of sex play, but certainly arousing.

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